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I look through the darkness to expose your lies

 

I hear your whispers under the starlit canopy

 

I smell your fear while crossing diamond oceans

 

I taste your love like a victim of faith

 

I touch your heart and turn your tears to roses

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just something i came up with at lunchtime, i gathered words from a few songs and used them to mould the poem on :D let me know what you think.. ?!

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I hear your whispers under the starlit canopy

 

The way you use words... Just... F*cking lovely.

More, please. :mashimaro5:

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This is truly beautiful. I love the way it flows together and the picture it paints in my mind as I read it.

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No words are suitable expressing my feelings than "Love it Love it...."....6f428754.gif

 

You loved ...by all senses!!!!

 

That's freakin' awesome!!

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wow im really greatfull for your responses, it really makes me happy u guys say that stuff :D thanks

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I really enjoyed reading this poem! As brohne said, I like very much the way it flows together! Very very beautiful! :msn_red_fox 6

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. .WOW! :D

 

. .it was just five lines but it expresses more than of a long poem, deep words that yet to be meaningful rabbit14

 

. .thanks for sharing this poem to us misakixusagi :leaf3:

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