misakixusagi Posted May 9, 2011 Posted May 9, 2011 I look through the darkness to expose your lies I hear your whispers under the starlit canopy I smell your fear while crossing diamond oceans I taste your love like a victim of faith I touch your heart and turn your tears to roses 10
misakixusagi Posted May 9, 2011 Author Posted May 9, 2011 just something i came up with at lunchtime, i gathered words from a few songs and used them to mould the poem on let me know what you think.. ?!
JenovaVII Posted May 9, 2011 Posted May 9, 2011 I hear your whispers under the starlit canopy The way you use words... Just... F*cking lovely. More, please. :mashimaro5: 2
brohne Posted May 9, 2011 Posted May 9, 2011 This is truly beautiful. I love the way it flows together and the picture it paints in my mind as I read it. 2
JuJu Posted May 9, 2011 Posted May 9, 2011 No words are suitable expressing my feelings than "Love it Love it....".... You loved ...by all senses!!!! That's freakin' awesome!! 2
misakixusagi Posted May 9, 2011 Author Posted May 9, 2011 wow im really greatfull for your responses, it really makes me happy u guys say that stuff thanks
Miro Posted May 9, 2011 Posted May 9, 2011 I really enjoyed reading this poem! As brohne said, I like very much the way it flows together! Very very beautiful! :msn_red_fox 6 1
K Posted May 10, 2011 Posted May 10, 2011 . .WOW! . .it was just five lines but it expresses more than of a long poem, deep words that yet to be meaningful rabbit14 . .thanks for sharing this poem to us misakixusagi :leaf3: 1
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