K Posted May 1, 2011 Posted May 1, 2011 (cloudy's super duper simple non-bl poem) :msn_red_fox 2 FOOD LOVE You're like sugar Crystal grains So sweet Partner to my cup of bitter You're like coffee Black grains So strong Wakens me, like morphine You're like creamer White powder So fluffy Makes my burden, lighter You're like milk Thick and creamy Uhmmm, so yummy! Makes me feel like kiddie You're like dark chocolate Solid bar Tastes li'l bitter yet sweet Such mystery underneath You're like sponge cake Soft and foamy So craving Yet gives me a slice of cozy You're like soup Woooh!, so hot! In my cold days Embraced me of warmth You're like main course That everybody's waiting for Craving savory taste I'm lucky to be in first place But above all these Is a food that everybody needs That you must treasure and keep ME!, your RICE, indeed (hahahaha, i don't know how i came up with this, i wanted to wrote something simple but joyful LOVE poem, i was not able to reach that goal, that's why it results to this, (LOL ) (but i think this for about 2 days, lol) :leaf5: 14
Matti_19 Posted May 1, 2011 Posted May 1, 2011 Haha so funny your poem Cloudy! I absolutely like it! 1
JuJu Posted May 1, 2011 Posted May 1, 2011 How sweeet it is!!!!! ^___^ You are so admirable cloudy....!! I like every word cause it brings me a very different and new taste of love (love with flavour of food lol) I really like it...So cute you are... 1
Amander123 Posted May 1, 2011 Posted May 1, 2011 lol awww this was so cute! Cloudy-chan can be my rice too! lol I loved it 1
Chacha Posted May 1, 2011 Posted May 1, 2011 So beautiful! I absolutely like it! And I laughed so much when I read it! ) 1
Miro Posted May 1, 2011 Posted May 1, 2011 Very very beautiful your poem! But above all these Is a food that everybody needs That you must treasure and keep ME!, your RICE, indeed It was so funny and cute! :msn_red_fox 15 1
K Posted May 2, 2011 Author Posted May 2, 2011 TO ALL . .thanks everyone :Red_fox7: . .i'm supah happy i made you all liked this :leaf3: . .i could all be your SUPAH RICE, lol :leaf5: :leaf12: 1
Yaoi Eater Posted May 2, 2011 Posted May 2, 2011 Sorry for coming late, I was at school till now The poem is different from what I've read here but in a good way And again I'm telling u, the title is very well chosen Waiting for the next one :leaf12: 1
Last_sky16 Posted May 4, 2011 Posted May 4, 2011 super cute and......ok....now im hungry......:hamtaro-005 (21): but its very joyful love....i love how food and love is connected..... 1
Aki Posted May 6, 2011 Posted May 6, 2011 Cloudy your poem is so funny! You're like soup Woooh!, so hot! In my cold days Embraced me of warmth Your bf seems really hot! like a hot soup. I liked it a lot, very funny and enjoyable to read! 1
K Posted May 6, 2011 Author Posted May 6, 2011 @kaouru-chan . .supah thanks for liking it , but i don't have a bf, lol rabbit6
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