Beach-normal poem :)

[misakixusagi]

The Beach

 

 

The wind I feel across my face

 

Gives me such a sense of space.

 

The ocean that’s so vast and wide

 

Has such a very youthful tide.

 

The sand that goes between my toes

 

Feels so soft and always flows

 

Towards the sea, the sun, the air

 

The beach is where I stop and stare.

[K]

. .simple yet it gives refreshing ambiance

 

. .but it's kinda hanging - "The beach is where I stop and stare" ... and ... (it was like that for me)

[misakixusagi]

hmmm cool, maybe i should look at extending this one lol this is one of my early poems like years ago so maybe i could re-vamp it now lol thanks cloudykateechizen x

[K]

hmmm cool, maybe i should look at extending this one lol this is one of my early poems like years ago so maybe i could re-vamp it now lol thanks cloudykateechizen x

 

. .i think i should wait for that

[JenovaVII]

As I read this poem the only thing filling my head was this one song. Seriously, in my opinion, it fits so damn well *.*

I really liked it, it gives a nice relaxing feeling and sense of peace. That's another reason, lyrics aside, that I thought of this song right away. Please, keep up your writing. I enjoy it very much (:

 

 

[misakixusagi]

Wow I have never heard this song , who is it ? Thatks jenova

[JuJu]

Thanks for the lovely poem ♥

[JenovaVII]

It's a song named I Wish You Were Here, by Incubus. Did you like it?

[misakixusagi]

yeah i did jenova, have to find it

[Amander123]

I loved the poem! It really makes me want to visit the beach now! lol. I don't live near the beach though But great poem!

[hinata--chan]

Love this very sweet . would be good for a poster ^^

[Rei]

So cute, I love the poem, really really beautiful