K Posted April 27, 2011 Share Posted April 27, 2011 . .i made 2 new poems couple of hours ago, one is bl and the other is not (i don't know if you could guys see this as a bl poem, but still here it is) BARENAKED In this midst, I walk So dark, I'm soak Yet, I need to move On this nowhere road Don't know the goal Why and what for? Guess, must find a piece From these scattered debris If i find, I shout If i didn't, out of sorts Still carry this vigor To route for more Then it rains Body now in stains Colorless but spur Inside me roars Cold and freezing Chilly and shaking I can't take it But need to bear it As I look, I see Those ravish eyes, I fear Wish I vanish And rush to my dear Wall starts to break Dangerous hands, rake Stripping this cover Can't stand this anymore "Where are you? Please help me, I need you!" I cried and moan "Please stop it! I beg you, It's my dear's own" But within, it reaches It's too late, I guess This last breath, must make BARENAKED feeling, to you, I confess 9 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
K Posted April 27, 2011 Author Share Posted April 27, 2011 . and here's the other not bl one EMPTY From dust to clay Molded and lay From his looks Oh, it's cooked! Bright stones were embedded In a circle, oh, it's head Stick with two holes Air to passes Dug a hole Words to install Red thing so licky Oh, for tasty But deaf is still Sounds must steal Dug another hole Left and right for more Lighted the coals Burn to colors Anyway it goes It still has roles Red stone embedded In clay must knitted Inside this case Is a life to amaze Then, laid on floor Opened the door Magic words, blew It livens, oh, it's true Delivers to earth Actions must oath A world to own Precious thing to owe Suddenly, it felt A missing piece left "What is this? Tell me, please!" 'Cause in this case Where red stone lays So cold and steady Is a feeling of EMPTY 8 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yaoifangirl Posted April 27, 2011 Share Posted April 27, 2011 Your poems are so cool! Especially the BL one! :7yoyo10: 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yaoi Eater Posted April 27, 2011 Share Posted April 27, 2011 Thanks for announcing me Now, let's see...The titles are very well chosen and I truly appreciate that u have rime to the lyrics Nice job, they're both well made.... The BL one seems more deep and full of feeling I really like 'em, post some more :msn_red_fox 3 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amander123 Posted April 28, 2011 Share Posted April 28, 2011 I really love them cloudy-chan!!! You're poems are so deep and full of emotion! Yours are so much better than mine lol Mine seem rather silly compared to yours :msn_red_fox 14 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
K Posted April 28, 2011 Author Share Posted April 28, 2011 I really love them cloudy-chan!!! You're poems are so deep and full of emotion! Yours are so much better than mine lol Mine seem rather silly compared to yours :msn_red_fox 14 . .domo arigato gosaimashita amander-sama . .but i still think, without the inspiration from your works and from the advices of senpai yoji, i guess i will not be able to move myself and made a poem like that, i owe alot to the both of you :leaf3: 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amander123 Posted April 28, 2011 Share Posted April 28, 2011 Well thank you cloudy-chan! I'm glad I could help inspire you to write such beautiful poems :3onion15: 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chacha Posted April 28, 2011 Share Posted April 28, 2011 I like very much both your poems! :5yoyo34: But just like Yaoi Eater said, the BL poem is even hotter! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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