brohne Posted April 27, 2011 Posted April 27, 2011 So . . . I rarely write poetry but I have written some song lyrics to go along with Savior. This one isn't really done yet, but I don't know what else to do with it. ^^ Wrapped up in your eyes Black and blue from the breath of you All of these subtle lies You thought to hide. Deceitful dreamer so devout, Did you think you could hide your naked heart? I will kiss you so that even a sigh cannot slip out. Wrapped up in your voice Black and blue from the hate of you Do I have any choice? All of this tenderness is untrue. Deceitful dreamer so devout, Did you think you could slip away unseen? I will kiss you so that even a sigh cannot slip out. Wrapped up in your love Black and blue from the want of you All of these schemes I am sick of. Deceitful dreamer so devout, Did you think you could tame me? I will kiss you so that even a sigh cannot slip out. Wrapped up in this shroud Black and blue from the sight of you All of this is not something I vowed. Deceitful dreamer so devout. Did you think you could hinder me? I will kiss you so that even a sigh cannot slip out. 4
K Posted April 27, 2011 Posted April 27, 2011 . . i really can't explain through my ordinary words, but i'll tell you, a part of my mind and heart says i do understood it . .somehow portrays untrue but still loving, i just felt it all . .i like this 1
misakixusagi Posted April 27, 2011 Posted April 27, 2011 Oh I really like this,cool wicked x impressed 1
Amander123 Posted April 28, 2011 Posted April 28, 2011 Wow I can really imagine music going along with these lyrics. Incredible Good job brohne! I love it!!
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