misakixusagi Posted March 10, 2011 Posted March 10, 2011 Life They all lie behind the smile; It’s like some fairy tale. They all play the part they’re cast And hide behind the veil. A curtain here, a stage door there; That’s how they come and go; The life of all the people That put on such a show. The words they weave with measured tone Which sound just like a script; Copying and repeating Until you declare that’s it They stop and stare right at you ‘How dare you say those things?’ They turn around and leave the stage; Believing they are kings. 15
misakixusagi Posted March 10, 2011 Author Posted March 10, 2011 thank you very much ^_^ :hamtaro-005 (8):
Nena21 Posted March 10, 2011 Posted March 10, 2011 "They stop and stare right at you ‘How dare you say those things?’ They turn around and leave the stage; Believing they are kings." This part is just wonderful! I love the whole poem, but at that part I was speechless...:5yoyo32: Really really good! I loved it!!!! :leaf3: 2
misakixusagi Posted March 10, 2011 Author Posted March 10, 2011 Glad u enjoyed it, it really makes me happy to see people enjoy them, cause no one i know has even seen them
Karin Posted March 10, 2011 Posted March 10, 2011 I like your poetry! Thx for sharing with us! :Red_fox: 1
Chacha Posted March 18, 2011 Posted March 18, 2011 I also like it!!! I like to read poetry! :Red_fox7: 1
JenovaVII Posted March 19, 2011 Posted March 19, 2011 "They all lie behind the smile (...) Believing they are kings." Love, love, LOVE. More, please?! :Red_fox: 2
Miro Posted March 19, 2011 Posted March 19, 2011 "They all lie behind the smile (...) Believing they are kings." Love, love, LOVE. More, please?! :Red_fox: Yes, I also want to read more poems! 2
K Posted April 28, 2011 Posted April 28, 2011 Life They all lie behind the smile; It’s like some fairy tale. They all play the part they’re cast And hide behind the veil. A curtain here, a stage door there; That’s how they come and go; The life of all the people That put on such a show. The words they weave with measured tone Which sound just like a script; Copying and repeating Until you declare that’s it They stop and stare right at you ‘How dare you say those things?’ They turn around and leave the stage; Believing they are kings. . .i love this, metaphors were great 1
lilredphoenix Posted July 16, 2011 Posted July 16, 2011 WOW! Misaki that was well said very expressive words about how ppl can be. 1
hinata--chan Posted November 25, 2011 Posted November 25, 2011 Wow Amazing very powerful poem . This line:They turn around and leave the stage; Believing they are kings. is wonderful.
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