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Forbidden Desire


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i wrote this May 27,2009 (so i was 11) here goes.......

 

 

Can't get what I truly desire...

 

The look in his eyes...

as if longing for nothing, but the touch if his lover

it hurts...my chest hurts

will I get what I truly desire?

 

I love him

can he hear me?

My voice is so loud,

does he even notice me?

Its hard...

why can't I ease this pain?

But I love him!!

will I get what I truly desire?

 

We're together...

But it doesn't feel real,

I'm happy...I really am

But...

What if I'm trapped in my own fantasy

 

I AM ... LOST, FORGOTTEN, TRAPPED.

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"Can't get what I truly desire...

 

The look in his eyes...

as if longing for nothing, but the touch if his lover

it hurts...my chest hurts

will I get what I truly desire?"

 

i like this so nice

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i didnt think i could write somethin' this deep

i was thinkin' about alot to have written somethin' like this

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WOW! Lotusflower that was beautiful such talent the words seemed to flow. Please continue to share with us when you can.

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