lotusflower Posted March 6, 2011 Posted March 6, 2011 i wrote this May 27,2009 (so i was 11) here goes....... Can't get what I truly desire... The look in his eyes... as if longing for nothing, but the touch if his lover it hurts...my chest hurts will I get what I truly desire? I love him can he hear me? My voice is so loud, does he even notice me? Its hard... why can't I ease this pain? But I love him!! will I get what I truly desire? We're together... But it doesn't feel real, I'm happy...I really am But... What if I'm trapped in my own fantasy I AM ... LOST, FORGOTTEN, TRAPPED. 10
현애 Posted March 6, 2011 Posted March 6, 2011 "Can't get what I truly desire... The look in his eyes... as if longing for nothing, but the touch if his lover it hurts...my chest hurts will I get what I truly desire?" i like this so nice
YLover Posted March 6, 2011 Posted March 6, 2011 Ohhh... so beautiful!!!! I looooove it!!! :leaf3: Was it made for that guy you was in love with?
lotusflower Posted March 6, 2011 Author Posted March 6, 2011 YLover no it wasn't it was jus the thought of the moment
lotusflower Posted June 18, 2011 Author Posted June 18, 2011 i didnt think i could write somethin' this deep i was thinkin' about alot to have written somethin' like this
lilredphoenix Posted July 16, 2011 Posted July 16, 2011 WOW! Lotusflower that was beautiful such talent the words seemed to flow. Please continue to share with us when you can. 1
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