misakixusagi Posted March 5, 2011 Posted March 5, 2011 Invisible I look at you as you stare at her You never seem to see Why can’t you just for one last look Turn and glance at me. I wonder if you’ve ever cared Or if you’ve ever thought About the boy that never speaks The one that’s never caught I feel so lonely standing here You would never know The pain of being different The pain that I don’t show But now it has become too late And I can’t take no more I place it just upon my wrist I think I’ll count to four.... 12
JenovaVII Posted March 5, 2011 Posted March 5, 2011 I wonder if you’ve ever cared Or if you’ve ever thought About the boy that never speaks The one that’s never caught I am dead in love with the way this strophe sounds when you read it aloud. Seriously. Thank you very much and keep presenting us with your words (: :msn_red_fox 15 1
현애 Posted March 6, 2011 Posted March 6, 2011 erm..i felt like i'm at that situation it's hurt...:leaf16: 1
YLove Posted March 7, 2011 Posted March 7, 2011 I love it very much! This part is just.... wow! "You would never know/The pain of being different/The pain that I don’t show". I love it a lot! I love your writing style! You should post some more! 1
YAO(H)I_lover Posted March 21, 2011 Posted March 21, 2011 Very touching:leaf9: I love poems that touch my heart... You did a great job!:leaf3: 1
K Posted April 28, 2011 Posted April 28, 2011 . .simple words were enough (i mean, these simple words that made the poem, was just enough to express hidden feelings) (expressive, indeed) . .i like it as a whole
YAO(H)I_lover Posted November 14, 2011 Posted November 14, 2011 I was editing some pictures and then I remembered your poem, so put it together with the pic. I hope you don't mind 3
misakixusagi Posted November 14, 2011 Author Posted November 14, 2011 Oh I love it,thank u so much,it looks awsome. good wrk 1
Miro Posted November 14, 2011 Posted November 14, 2011 I like it so much!!!! I liked this poem a lot and with the image is even better. Thanks misakixusagi and YAO(H)I_lover! 2
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