Darkness

[Sheba562]

Darkness

The rich deep darkness of the night

The velvet darkness of a room

The silent darkness of a soul

But in that darkness, a pin point of light

The diamond light of a single star

The light in the crack of the door

The spark of light in the soul

And that light is you

And with that light I am complete

[Justme]

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Simple and beautiful *____*

[Sheba562]

*Bows gracefully and humbly* thank you

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[XiuLin]

might be better at this than me. and too bad i was not the first to like and comment.

[Sheba562]

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not sure if I am better but thank you

[XiuLin]

it's simple, how poems should be. well, mine was just more detailed.

[Sheba562]

Another poem

 

I watch the rain soaked clouds march across the evening sky

The filtered sunset highlighting the grays

And I think of you

When we were together

When we were happy

But you are lost now

I will still search for you

In the rain

And I will bring you home

 

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Oh that so matches my siggy

 

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[XiuLin]

May I elaborate on the darkness poem here?

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[Sheba562]

Well

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if you do that it will change my meaning behind the poem and will cease to be my poem