Sheba562 Posted May 19, 2014 Posted May 19, 2014 Darkness The rich deep darkness of the night The velvet darkness of a room The silent darkness of a soul But in that darkness, a pin point of light The diamond light of a single star The light in the crack of the door The spark of light in the soul And that light is you And with that light I am complete
Justme Posted May 24, 2014 Posted May 24, 2014 Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. Simple and beautiful *____*
Sheba562 Posted May 26, 2014 Author Posted May 26, 2014 *Bows gracefully and humbly* thank you Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links.
XiuLin Posted May 26, 2014 Posted May 26, 2014 might be better at this than me. and too bad i was not the first to like and comment.
Sheba562 Posted May 26, 2014 Author Posted May 26, 2014 Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. not sure if I am better but thank you
XiuLin Posted May 26, 2014 Posted May 26, 2014 it's simple, how poems should be. well, mine was just more detailed.
Sheba562 Posted May 26, 2014 Author Posted May 26, 2014 Another poem I watch the rain soaked clouds march across the evening sky The filtered sunset highlighting the grays And I think of you When we were together When we were happy But you are lost now I will still search for you In the rain And I will bring you home - - - Updated - - - Oh that so matches my siggy - - - Updated - - - Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links.
XiuLin Posted May 29, 2014 Posted May 29, 2014 May I elaborate on the darkness poem here? Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links.
Sheba562 Posted May 30, 2014 Author Posted May 30, 2014 Well Please Register/ Sign In, in order to see the links. if you do that it will change my meaning behind the poem and will cease to be my poem
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