NeoNR Posted November 27, 2013 Posted November 27, 2013 So guys! I'm basically new here and I was hoping if there are some wattpad authors/readers in this forum I just made a yaoi story and I thought you guys could give it a read and if you have made a story don't be shy you can share it here also! i enjoy reading yaoi even though its text based :DD
Ero Gaki Posted November 30, 2013 Posted November 30, 2013 I never checked any BL Stories in Wattpad since I prefer FF more. I'll check out your story then~
NeoNR Posted November 30, 2013 Author Posted November 30, 2013 WAAAH!!! Thank you thank you~!!! :DD So what do you think? is it good? bad? too boring? or too fast?
Ero Gaki Posted November 30, 2013 Posted November 30, 2013 I'm still going to check it out. I'll inform you after i read it ~ :3
NeoNR Posted November 30, 2013 Author Posted November 30, 2013 YAY!! :DD hahah ill await eagerly for your response :DD
Frostwind Posted November 30, 2013 Posted November 30, 2013 WOW REALLYFROM WATTPAD!? Okay I am exaggerating but I am gonna check it out >. I'm from wattpad too :hamtaro-005 (8):
Frostwind Posted November 30, 2013 Posted November 30, 2013 Okay I'm done reading it Lemme tell you some tips... Firstly, you have to put a (boyxboy) beside the title to warn some people that are... um... Homophobic? Secondly, even if it is really troublesome, you have to write the story properly in either a first person manner or a third person way. Not put it like it's some sort of video. Sam:Sorry Max! Max:Eh? You know my name? Write it this way: As Sam rushed out of his house in panic, he bumped into someone he did not expect to meet. "Hey watch it! Moron!" Sam looked up, and came face to face with a person glaring at him. "Sorry Max!" Sam apologized quickly to the person before attempting to get away. "Eh? You know my name?" Max asked him curiously. Sam froze in his tracks, unsure of what to say. He need to get to school! He shuffled his feet to the direction he was heading slowly replying quickly,"Eh...Yes!I mean no!... I mean bye!" with that, he ran as if he was on fire to get to school quickly, leaving the speechless Max behind him. Was that a bit too much? I tend to overdo things a little bit...:hamtaro-005 (21):
NeoNR Posted December 1, 2013 Author Posted December 1, 2013 Oh... XD I'm very sorry that i tend to do it like that but thanks for the tip! ill start writing my stories like that more :DD
Kenshikatetsu Posted February 16, 2014 Posted February 16, 2014 Im Part of A wattpad... I Think we will Become Friend... I also writing Yaoi Novel ^___^...
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