On

[Rikimaru]

A seed alone

cannot become a cherry tree

your feet grow weak if they don't beat street repeatedly

a river never flows with out a hill to travel down

a lotus lives beneath the mud before it grows

suppose

One day the sun came around but never found a ground to shine on

the moon was there, but who cares? the two would soon collide

these words are sprouted from one divine ingredient

The Earth is ours to keep alive we should be feeding it

[Miro]

The poem is very beautiful and touching! :Red_fox7:

[mangotango]

I liked this one, too

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For some reason, I especially like the fact that "suppose" has its own line. I think it really sets the poem off and splits it, without seeming to split it (if that makes sense?) xD