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@Yaoiloverxxa Hello. I am not into romantic stories but I would like to share what I think about your story. Well... this is very... daring, should I say? But it's not unrefined at all since this is your story. I actually think it's quite impressive that you can write this and you're using words that directly describes the actions of the main characters but one of the things that I see in this, aside from the typos, is the way their conversation goes. I meant it like this. Since this is a first person manner of writing it'll be very hard but you could be both first and second person when writing stories without removing the first person manner of writing idea. It will always depend on how you'd write it but this is what I think some of the basic formatting in writing dialogues: 1. If the character is talking to his mind, enclosed it with double quotations at the beginning and ending of the statement and italicized it to at least inform the reader that the character is talking to itself and separate it. You could include it in a paragraph as well where the character is delivering his dialogue loudly so the readers will know who's talking to himself. [Refer to number three.] Ex.: "I can't fight this feeling anymore. I really do love him and if I don't say it right now, my heart might explode and I will regret this for the rest of my life." 2. Each one of the character's dialogues should be in a different paragraph. It will depend on how you'd write the narration of the actions since you write in a first person manner. 3. If you plan to add the character's dialogue on a single paragraph, it should be like this: Ex.: "But... I am still uncertain about what I feel for you." I lowered my head because of extreme embarrassment. "Please give me more time to think." But to be honest, I don't know what to do. [Notice that italicized part attached at the first delivered lines of the character. In this case, you can just remove the double quotation as long as it is attached in the paragraph. This will do as well.] [P.S.: I admit it's quite hard for me to think of cheesy dialogues since this is yaoi, but if you're unclear with this, I'll finish my proofreading of my romantic novel [i am almost dying and I am striving so hard while writing it because it is not really my thing] so you'll see how it should be written. But no doubt, you have a clear idea of what you'll be writing and it's very, very impressive at how you managed it to write it straight to the point. Probably a little, cantankerous for me but still, a very good one. You'll learn more. By the way, thank you for allowing me to look for the corrections here. I get to share a little bit of my writing style. [if you can call it like that. I hope this one helped you even a little.]

Oh gosh.... neglecting doesn't even cut it anymore! >_ I am so very sorry to those who follow this story, and i'm so sorry for not having it finished by now. Yes i managed to do the next to last chapter, which means it'll end the next time i post anything about this story. Once again, forgive me for my lateness. Things have been very complicated for me, and since i promissed not to let them hanging, i might take a while but i will finish them. Thank you to everyone who reads Kai and Shouji's story. They'll be saying goodbye next time, so for now, hope you enjoy reading this. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Part Twenty Five (part2)- The wait! The hours grew larger and larger by the second. Shouji was getting so pissed off for being left alone, abandoned even, he was one fuse away of blowing up like a fucking time bomb any time now, and the time was already holding on to his last tick tacks before the actual explosion. He knew. It’s not like he was so stupid and ignorant not to feel in his bones the thick layer of pressure expanding, the stink of fear threatening to overwhelm everything around, strong enough to make his nose twitch and ache. But where the fuck was he?! That was the only thing Shouji could think about. The only thing worrying Shouji was the lack of knowledge on his lover whereabouts. Kai left early that morning to “take care of some business”, and hadn’t returned yet. If the danger was nearing so much Shouji couldn’t even leave the freaking house, why was Kai free to leisurely go around and about?! He was the most important thing to protect, not Shouji... Shouji didn’t care for the crap everyone was telling him. “Boss’s a mean ass ‘Shou, don’t worry... He’ll be here in a min’, you’ll see.” “Knock it off with the negative shit kiddo, Boss’s gonna be home soon...” The fuck was that all about?! He didn’t care about that shit! He wanted Kai! He wanted him there, close enough to touch him... to feel him, to hear him breathing even. He remembered the last events between them and again fully realized. He was dead weight now. Without that man, he was nothing. Imagining being left behind, or never seeing Kai again was not a possibility to take account for. What changed? What made a guy who never had anything to lose, who never cared for a shit, garbage of modern society, scum of this earth, be so afraid of everything and anything right now? What made this guy change so much, to the point where his head thinks of nothing except this one person? And he remembered... The things girls used to talk about in class... The dramas that used to be on TV which his mother used to like so much... The stories on those pink and fluffy books all over the libraries. The songs, which filled people hears with nothing but that same theme... They all talked about it. That thing, they called love. That thing that wrecked a person’s heart, the thing that made their life so perfect almost seemed impossible to believe it could actually happen, the thing that made people laugh so hard it brought tears to their eyes, the thing that had the power to destroy them or make them the most happy there ever was. Love. Shouji was in love. For the first time in his life, someone came and stole the happiness, the sadness, his everything away and stored it deep inside themselves and now Shouji, could only live next to that person, right next the thief of his smiles and tears, right there beside him. Any other reality... just wasn’t possible anymore. The faintest smile caressed Shouji’s face, and he thought... just how happy he was, even when he became a prisoner of someone’s will, of someone’s gestures... But still... he was so blessed, nothing could overcome it. He welcomed it. And he could die happy now. Someone, kind enough in this world, showed him what it was to love and be loved. That was priceless. That was unparalleled... That was his most important treasure to keep. Until the day he died. Another 20 minutes of thinking and cursing, of smiling and frowning passed until Shouji listened to Toshiro talking to someone outside. They were trying their best not to be heard. They probably thought they would be safe there and didn’t even notice Shouji was right beside the glass, listening to everything. “Say... is Boss sure that’s the right thing to do? I mean... He’s gonna be hunt down man...” “’Course he won’t you piss head! Boss’s planning something big this time... He was clever enough to go there and leave no tracks.” “But say Toshiro, Boss’s really gonna go there alone?” “That’s the plan... Well he’s probably already there right now. He said he wanted to caught him right-handed, so the fucking snake can’t run away this time. He even called Mutsumi-Oyaji so that he can see what that mother fucker is doing these days...” “What... Mutsumi-Oyaji?! But why?” “Shit, dumb as a rock as usual... ‘cause Musumi Boss swore to protect Kai Boss in case that son of’ a bitch ever planned anything against him. The thing is Boss never made it to get proof of what that snake’s doing... But today’s gonna be different. Boss’s gonna make it ‘cause that bastard has called all his “friends” over today so they can talk about whatever it is they’re planning so they can take care of Boss...” “Shit... Toshiro!! That’s...” “Yeah... Boss’s taking a huge risk... Today i left him right around the garden bridge where no one could see us and he just went up to that guy’s part of the complex. I still haven’t heard from Boss, but i know... i just know everything’s ok.” “How can y’a be sure man...?” “Well... it’s Boss we’re talking about. Do you think he’ll let anyone touch him?” “Well...” “He won’t. Not now. Not when he found his reason to live... He’ll kick and shout and kill everything in sight if he has too, just to protect it...” “Wha’?!” “Never mind you...” “But Toshiro...” “We just need to do what we were asked to do. Protect the kid. Ya hear?” “Roger...” “This is all messed up.” That was what Shouji immediately thought when he heard Toshiro’s words. The reason Kai wasn’t home yet was because he was at that monster’s house?! “The fucking hell...” Shouji knew Kai was powerful and strong, but that moron had just entered the snake’s lair. How could Shouji stay calm after listening to that? How could he stay still, when he knows his most important person’s in danger? He couldn’t sit still. And he decided to leave the house and look for Kai. He would be careful, he would be a shadow not to let anyone notice him. He just wanted to see his beloved. He just wanted to help him if necessary. But what Shouji didn’t know was that the snake was already waiting for the time Shouji decided to leave the place that made him so secure. What Shouji didn’t know was, that his decision to leave would change the world’s events, and misery would fall upon them. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Well that's it for now! I'll see you next time for the last and final part. *bows* Thank you again, thank you so much for reading my stories!

I live in America, I am actually Native American and I carry a card and am registered as a Native American. It's pretty sweet especially when NO ONE believes me then I can go BAM I have a card~ But seriously my skin colour and hair colour and eye colour no... I do not look Native American. But if you look at the shape of my face and body that's where you can sort of see the body shape of my tribe. My tribe is on the north west coast of the United States in Oregon. The Band I hail from is Cow Creek, but it's a band in the Umpqua tribe. Woooo~

Who is this cute boy?

Vassalord OVA (English Subs) Title: Vassalord OVA Alt. title: ヴァッサロード Plot: Charley, a cyborg vampire who does the Vatican's dirty work, is the thrall of the local vampire playboy Johnny Rayflo. As the two fight crime (and each other), hilarity, violence and sacrilege ensue! But can Charley resist his own desperate cravings for blood? Find out as the devilish duo go up against a childlike vampire princess, a mysterious branch of the Unitarian Church... and one another. Type: OVA Episodes: 1 Released: Mar 15, 2013 Director: Nakazawa Kazuto Character Design: Takahashi Nariyuki Producers: Production I.G Genres: Action, Comedy, Mystery, Fantasy, Shounen Ai, Vampire, Supernatural Translated by: YaoiOtaku Translation: Saga Timing & encoding: Key Format: Avi Dowload Vassalord OVA (English Subs): Mediafire 4Shared NOTE: You can share the OVA outside the forum (Youtube, Facebook etc.) as long as you give credits (a link to YaoiOtaku). Watch Vassalord OVA Online (HD Quality): Vassalord OVA Online For download re-upload requests, post here so the staff notices them. Note: Please only ask for re-upload if none of the download links work after checking ALL the pages of the thread. Thanks! YO Staff

Tell me what country you come from, and after that, say something in you own language. (include the english translation to that of course) ! I'm from the cold, northern Finland in the upper-head of Europe. Minä rakastan sinua. = I love you. Mitä kuuluu? = How're you doing? Olen hullu. = I'm crazy. Minulla on siili nahkahousuissani = I've got a hedgehog in my leatherpants. No need to put up that much sentences. It was just an example that I showed you. Now it's your turn! (Btw, am I the only Finnish person on this forum or does someone know another finn from here?)

I have to clear up with this... Well... one thing I know is this picture is from his graduation album... He should have 4 of it... Gr.6(11-12), Gr.9(14-15), Gr.12(17-18) and University(21-22)... I know it's not University... Because, I know Dai-chan did audition before he graduate from University... He should have little longer hair and less chubby face... And during high school he play soccer... So I think he should had more darker skin... For the shire... as you may know in Japan they wear school uniform... So Dai-chan school uniform was required to wear shire... So he had that shire on it... I saw other picture and had next person has same shire with vests on... You may saw in Takumi-kun movie... They wear shire with vests sometime... So my guess is when he was middle school... But, I might be wrong and it might be from his high school... Any way... one thing for sure is it's in his teen year... Not when he was in 20th's... --;;;

You guys will kill me with pics from Tenimyu time. I just re-watched Seigaku x Higa cause of that post before and now such cutesy from that time... Ah, seeing Dai-chan giving baby Shougo a piggyback ride was so sweet. Now i'm iching to watch DL6th.

Beautiful Sunday, time to go shopping ^____________^

I think it's a few years before. He joined Tenimyu in 2007 and didn't use a wig, so he didn't have such short hair. He joined at age 24, if i'm not mistaken. Maybe we can lower the limit to 23. I don't know much about his carrer before Tenimyu. Edit: i think i'm wrong by one year there, but i'm too tired to check dates correctly. ^_^

AHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAAHAAHAAHA. Please don't kill me. But it's hilarious how he hasn't changed a bit, his humor and smile. He looked so different comparing now though. But he aged so well into handsomeness. Man, with that picture floating around the net, I' wonder how Dai-cha would feel.. upset? embarassed? .. Unless he did post it himself. hahaha. But seriously, I think this must be a while after high school, such colors for some sort of job listing. Maybe? Definitely doesn't look teen to me. Around 25 tops to me.

@Asclepius I don't know. They didn't say the age there.

He didn't change much. Only the hair changed. How old was him there?

Platform: Windows 98/Me/XP Minimum System Requirements: CPU: Pentium 300MHz RAM: 64MB HDD: 350MB free space Video: 800x600 resolution or higher, 16-bit color Sound: WAV/PCM audio Other: Requires CDROM and DirectX 8.1 Release Date: 2002 Genre: ADV Rating: 18+ Voice: Full voice Translation made by: Onadoru Euphoria Plot: The story is set in an hypothetical fantasy role-playing game world, which once was menaced by a cruel demonic entity called Hadeus. The terrible war which followed had left many orphans, and one of them is Might. Raised up without his parents, with the only company of his older friend Adonis (another orphan), Might became an ambitious teenager training for his dream to become a soldier of the royal army. One day, though, Might found himself terribly wounded after falling off a cliff while training. Adonis, who loved Might over anything else, used a forbidden dark spell to save his life. So Might's life was saved... but Adonis mysteriously disappeared. Might will then go on a quest to find out what has happened to his beloved Adonis, meeting a rather wide range of handsome characters – each one with a peculiar personality – who will either join him in his quest or become an obstacle to it. The player, after making the appropriate choices, will be able to pair up the protagonist with one of the characters he will meet. Torrent File: The Game + Upgrade 1.2 + English Patch Mediafire links: English Patch (If you already have the game installed, if you don't, please download the torrent file) If you need help with the installation, visit this page: Installation Guide for Silver Chaos + Upgrade + English Patch EDIT: Visit this page for or a video installation guide for Silver Chaos + Upgrade + English Patch For download re-upload requests, post here so the staff notices them. Note: Please only ask for re-upload if none of the download links work after checking ALL the pages of the thread. Thanks! YO Staff

Name: 水名瀬雅良 [Minase Masara] Birthday: Dec 16 Gender: F || Works || Aibou no Jouken Ai no Dorei [novel] Aishuu Anata wo Mamoritakute Cinderella Plot Daikirai na Yatsu Doukyonin no Binandomo Empty Heart Father Complex Gokujou no Koibito Inu to no Hibi Itsumo Yasashii Itsuwari no Daishou Kokoro to Karada no Hazama Libido Love & Action Lover's Position Machibito Manatsu no Zanshou Midara na Sasayaki Missing Code Sawareru Taion Secretary Shortcut Love Take Over Zone Tasogare wa Karera no Jikan The Lonely Egoist [novel] Toiki Yori mo Yasashii Tonari ni Iru no ni, Tooi Torawarebito Tsugunai no Yukue Usotsuki na Kimi no Toriko Watashi ni Nita Dareka Yasashiku Toraete

Your card is: S & M A few of pain gives a lot of pleasure...

@Ridd hahahaha xD you sure know how to do stuff ne

@Ridd I am from the pearl of the orient seas. Philippines. *-* Err.. Okay. Hi Ridd 8D Kamusta ka na? Ako, maayos naman ako, salamat ((: Hi Ridd 8D How are you? Me, I'm fine, thank you ((:

I'm from Poland. Central Europa and close to Czech Republic and Finland too xD Sentence, hm... Cześć - Hi Dobry wieczór - Good night Kocham yaoi - I love yaoi and more, and more

I'm from The Czech Republic~~ That's in the middle of Europe. Something in Czech? Hmmm.. Ahoj. = Hi. Jak se máš? = How are you? I can't think of anything more to say.....so that's about it~

@Yaoiloverxxa: I thank you very much. Monologue writers are very rare and I am impressed that you can write them in Dutch. If there will be a chance where we'll meet each other in person, I won't let it slip. I'll let you listen to my music as well, teach you some sports and read some of my original manuscripts. You're a very interesting person. I know you'll go far and make your own style. That is not actually my style. That's a basic formatting in laying down the dialogues of characters. My style is that I start from the ending or some parts in the middle of the story then sometimes go back to the beginning of the story and when it comes to the ending, BOOM! Tragedy. Thank you very much. I am happy that I get to talk to you about things like this.

Thank you soooooooooo much! I really appreciate it! Since I am a rookie, I don't mind it at all! this is also my first time writing a story.. I normally write monologue's or poems in Dutch, but thank you, your style of writing is very impressive @Mariana53

Your card is: Pegasus Today nothing is impossible. The end of the world will start when a Pegasus land on the hood of your car...

"Nothing happens to anybody which he is not fitted by nature to bear." Marcus Aurelius Antoninus "Vanity and pride are different things, though the words are often used synonymously.... Pride relates more to our opinion of ourselves, vanity to what we would have others think of us." Jane Austen,

“Everything you can imagine is real.” ― Pablo Picasso I love this quote by Picasso. He's one of the starters of Cubism along with Georges Bracques. This quote is always my inspiration whenever I make new novels. Thank you very much.

... "An artist doesn't depend on only ONE description. His creativity and imagination should be enough to appreciate and criticize his surroundings and even himself at the very same level."

Your not corny, cause I TOTALLY GET IT!! I want the video when it comes out, I wish I could read Japanese better to find out the release date and so on. You should have seen me when I spotted that in my timeline (geek) I'm scrolling la la la scrolling come to Baba pic, and I freeze and stare at it for a good 5 minutes before my mind can function again, The power that man has over me... Yeah he is asking for the wrong thing! If any of you ever hear him scream "TASUKETE!!!" he is fine, no need to come, I promise to be gentle!

I see a lot of first person writing, which I'm exceptionally bad at *tosses fic into the mix and prays* Lost Boys

'MISTAKES MEANS YOU'RE TRYING' -by Anonymous. We shouldn't be afraid to take the risk. Trying and making mistakes is better than regretting by not doing anything. (:

What if this all is just a dream? That way we know which pad we should avoid and which we shouldn't..

Being friends with your ex shows that you two are mature enough to get over the fact that you weren't meant to be.

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Original name: Asanaga Fugetsu, Shodouka desu Manga ALT. names: 朝長風月、書道家です; Asanaga Fugetsu, Shodoka desu.; Tomonaga Fuugetsu, Shodouka desu. ; Asaosa Fuugetsu, Shodouka desu Original run: 2012 Description: N/A Manga-type: Manga Written by: Kyou Kitazawa Drawn by: Kyou Kitazawa Published by: N/A Group(s) Scanlating: See watermarks Status: 1 Volume (Complete) Completely Scanlated: No Completely Translated: No Genres: Yaoi Categories: Romance Drama Main Characters: N/A Adaptations available: N/A Recommendations: Puchitto Hajiketa, Mori no Yu wa Kyou mo Poka Poka! Download Asanaga Fugetsu, Shodouka desu Manga LINK For download re-upload requests, post here so the staff notices them. Note: Please only ask for re-upload if none of the download links work after checking ALL the pages of the thread. Thanks! YO Staff

Title: Boku no Koi no Hanashi Himegoto Manga ALT. names: Boku no Koi no Hanashi Himegoto ll 繽紛愛情心戀心 ll Intriguing Secrets Manga Type : Manga Series Groups Scanlating : Aarinfantasy Genre : Romance ll School Life ll Shounen Ai Status : 1 Volume ll Complete ll Written by: SHINBA Rize Year : 2006 Published by: Houbunsha Completely Translated: No Main Characters: Umehara ll Mizue Recommendations: Eden de Aou ll Gallery Fake Description : The midsummer sun's rays enter the courtyard. Umehara of the school's art club is commanded to do weeding as a punishment with Mizue, a classmate he doesn't get along with. It was supposed to be the worst scenario Umehara could find himself in, but he begins to have a crush on Mizue and cannot tell anyone about it. Suddenly, Mizue asks Umehara, who puts his feelings into his paintbrush, to draw a picture of him...?! The two of them end up spending time alone in the art room after school. What is he to do with the feelings for Mizue that he can't suppress? Read Boku no Koi no Hanashi Himegoto Online Boku no Koi no Hanashi Himegoto ~~ Licensed by Juné ~~

hi everyone haw are you doing ? this is my first thread so i hope that you like this idea:hamtaro-005 (5): the game says i bet that like : i bet that i will get a bad mark on since >o>" i bet that i wont ever have a cat T^T but you wont really bet on anything lol so lets start ^^ I bet that nezu will never change the autograph :hamtaro-005 (6):

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Great chapter Bels, I really liked it a way lot. Very beautiful words. Thanks for your effort knowing how busy you are. Can't wait for the developement

Mitsu it'll be alright ///hugs you very tightly. oh wait... i'm not hugabl-FUCK.

@rainbowman: Yes, thank you very much. You take care, too.

I am currently eating the tuna sandwich that I made awhile ago with an iced tea. Let's eat everyone. Thank you.

And I sing Taiwanese, Spanish and Korean songs as well [but I am not a K-Pop fan].

Star Spangled Banner was the first song I ever sang and I was around 3 or 4.

I'll go to heaven for the climate, and hell for the company" mark twain~

@koukoutsi Nice to like it ^^. And do you like sing old songs?

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I'm too direct... I ask persons soo many things (and private things) even if I don't know them too well and many get uncomfortable... but I can't help it :leaf8: