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Heheheh....*grins*

 

Well I think I get too excited talking about them...

This is what will happen in BabaTaiki took over my mind.. +_+

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Oh I'm just getting warmed up for my writing. Been wrestling with some mind kinks. This idea has been on my head ever since reading Taiki's blog. I had to get it out somehow. Hope you guys like this.

 

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(Door opens)

 

BABA: Hey!

 

 

TAIKI: What are you doing here?

 

 

BAB: I came as soon as I heard. I should have come sooner but I couldn't get out of the studio.

 

 

TAIKI: What did you hear? I don't understand.

 

 

BABA: I heard you got admitted to the hospital.

 

 

TAIKI: Oh. That.

 

 

BABA: I would have wanted to come visit you at the hospital.

 

 

TAIKI: That's okay.

 

 

BABA: Do you mind if I come in?

 

 

TAIKI: Oh shit. Sorry...sure, sure...come on in. Have a seat. Do you want something to drink?

 

 

BABA: Hey, I didn't come here to be entertained. I came here to see how you're doing. Are you okay?

 

 

TAIKI: (pauses) Yeah...I'm fine. I'm just....(shakes head) No. I don't know.

 

BABA: (pats coach) Come here. Have a seat.

 

TAIKI: (drops on couch heavily and sighs)

 

BABA: You don't look so good. I can see it in your eyes. You look like hell.

 

TAIKI: I'm just tired. But I have so many commitments and there are projects lined up for me to do. I thought that maybe going on a family trip will do wonders for me. I mean it did to a point. I miss my family. They love me. I love them. Then I come back to work. I collapse like a ton of bricks. Next thing I know I see doctors and nurses checking on me. My manager on the phone. Everything tastes like glue.

 

BABA: (sighs) I should have come sooner.

TAIKI: Well, you're here now. That's something.

 

BABA: I could stay.

 

 

TAIKI: (smirks) What you're gonna play nurse to me?

 

 

BABA: I can dress like one if you like.

 

 

TAIKI: (chuckles) Don't.

 

 

BABA: Oh, so you've seen the movie?

 

 

TAIKI: (shakes his head and smiles weakly) You're alright just the way you are.

 

 

BABA: Want me to make you some tea? I could manage to make a nice hot steamy congee. I guarantee it won't taste like glue.

 

 

TAIKI: Sounds good.

 

 

BABA: Alright, you just sit here and relax. Watch TV or whatever. I'm going to the kitchen.

 

 

TAIKI: No. I'm going with you. I haven't seen you cook before. I'll be out of your way. I promise.

 

 

BABA: Suit yourself.

 

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BABA: So what do you think?

 

 

TAIKI: Not bad.

 

 

BABA: It doesn't taste like glue?

 

 

TAIKI: (grins) It taste like congee. A really good one. Thanks, Baba-chan.

 

 

BABA: Well, after you're done with that. Just leave the dishes in the sink and I'll take care of it later.

 

 

TAIKI: Why? Where are you going?

 

 

BABA: I'll make a hot bath.

 

 

TAIKI: Sure go ahead.

 

 

BABA: It's not for me.

 

 

TAIKI: (stops eating) Is it for me?

 

 

BABA: Bingo!

 

 

TAIKI: Dude, you don't have to. It's fine. This congee is more than enough already.

 

 

BABA: Just finish your food, okay? Let me handle this.

 

 

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TAIKI: What are you watching?

 

 

BABA: (presses on remote control) Sports.

 

 

TAIKI: Oh.

 

 

BABA: So did you enjoy your bath?

 

 

TAIKI: Yeah. I did. Thanks. I needed that.

 

 

BABA: (smiles) I'm glad.

 

 

TAIKI: (smiles)

 

 

BABA: Does your stomach still hurt?

 

 

TAIKI: Not now. No. I have pills for that just in case.

 

 

BABA: Are you expecting company anytime through the day or later tonight?

 

 

TAIKI: Not really.

 

 

BABA: Are you gonna go to sleep?

TAIKI: Uhm...I could but it wouldn't be right. I mean..you're here. It would be kinda rude, don't you think?

 

 

BABA: Why would it be rude? I'm not the one who's been under the weather.

 

 

TAIKI: Yeah but still...I mean you could go. I wouldn't want to bore you.

 

 

BABA: Who said I'm bored?

 

 

TAIKI: Well....

 

 

BABA: Do you want me to go?

 

 

TAIKI: (sighs) I hate it when you do that.

 

 

BABA: (smiles) What am I doing? It's a simple question.

 

 

TAIKI: Dude, you come in here unannounced. Make me an amazing congee. Prepare a hot bath for me and now you're asking me if I want you to go.

 

 

BABA: And the answer is?

 

 

TAIKI: (looks down)

 

 

BABA: (approaches and puts his hand on his shoulder) Hey...I'm waiting.

 

 

TAIKI: I'm not sure.

 

 

BABA: (sighs) Alright...get in your room.

 

 

TAIKI: (puzzled) Eh? What? Wait...why are you coming in too?

 

 

BABA: Lie down on the bed. Are you wearing boxers?

 

 

TAIKI: OF COURSE.

 

 

BABA: Lay flat on your stomach.

 

 

TAIKI: What do you think you're doing?

 

 

BABA: Do you have any lotions or oil around here? (opens drawers)

 

 

TAIKI: Yes, I do. They're in the bathroom cabinet. But that's not the point. What do you think you're doing?

 

 

BABA: Alright, I'll get them. (walks to the door)

 

 

TAIKI: No. Stop. Stay. Just...waitasecond...(scratches head)

 

 

BABA: I told you to lay flat on your stomach so I can massage your back.

 

 

TAIKI: No.

 

 

BABA: Okay then. Maybe I'll just work on your arms and legs.

 

 

TAIKI: No.

 

 

BABA: What do you think I was gonna do?

 

 

TAIKI: I don't know. You scare me sometimes, you know that?

 

 

BABA: I do?

 

 

TAIKI: Yeah.

 

 

BABA: (sits beside him) How about now?

 

 

TAIKI: Scarier.

 

 

BABA: (slips hands onto bathrobe) Your shoulders are tense. I can feel it knotted.

 

 

TAIKI: Mmmmmmm...

 

 

BABA: Do as I say, Taiki.

 

 

TAIKI: Okay.

 

 

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BABA: Well?

TAIKI: How did you learn to massage so well?

 

 

BABA: From a soap lady.

 

 

TAIKI: (chuckles) Are you serious?

 

 

BABA; Yep. She has very talented hands.

 

 

TAIKI: Are you telling me, you slept with a soap lady?

 

 

BABA: (grins) Are you jealous?

 

 

TAIKI: (scoffs) Don't be ridiculous.

 

 

BABA; I told you she has very talented hands. I didn't have to sleep with her to know that.

 

 

TAIKI: Feels good.

 

 

BABA: I need you to lay on your back now.

 

 

TAIKI: (muffled) No.

 

 

BABA; Why not?

 

 

TAIKI: I like it better laying on my stomach.

 

 

BABA; Are you sure?

 

 

TAIKI: Baba-chan....?

 

 

BABA: Hmmmm...? What is it?

 

 

TAIKI: This isn't some ploy to get me to do.....you know....do stuff with you or something...uhm...

 

 

BABA: (whispers) I don't take advantage of the sick.

 

 

TAIKI: I'm not sick.

 

 

BABA: So you're saying it's okay if I take advantage of you then?

 

 

TAIKI: Damn it...that's why I say you're scary.

 

 

BABA: Then stop asking me scary questions. (laughs)

 

 

TAIKI: (turns to lay on his back) Will you stay?

 

 

BABA: Of course.

 

 

TAIKI: (frowns) No funny business.

 

 

BABA: (grins) Whatever happened to scary?

 

 

TAIKI: (smiles) This bed is big enough for two.

 

 

BABA: Do you mind if I take a shower first?

 

 

TAIKI: Not at all.

 

 

BABA: Will you be awake when I get back?

 

 

TAIKI: I'll wait. (smiles)

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Yojo, Yoji naughty girl. I love it. Those two are so funny. I will wait for more.

 

oh thank you so much, you loved it.

I can't help giggling when I read it again myself. LOL

I'm like...what are you two doing there? xD

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OMG!!!!! or should i say.. OH MY YOJICHAN!!!! why u alwys ended it LIKE THAT??!!! *pinch ur cheeks*

Kyaaa!!! Baba chan did came huh? LOL *get stucked between fantasy and reality*

Wtf??!!! Baba chan massaged him?? Im wondering how was Taiki feeling having Baba chan to massage him. But i think i know after reading the last part. He just couldnt hold it huh? *slaps myself* LOL

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OMG!!!!! or should i say.. OH MY YOJICHAN!!!! why u alwys ended it LIKE THAT??!!! *pinch ur cheeks*

Kyaaa!!! Baba chan did came huh? LOL *get stucked between fantasy and reality*

Wtf??!!! Baba chan massaged him?? Im wondering how was Taiki feeling having Baba chan to massage him. But i think i know after reading the last part. He just couldnt hold it huh? *slaps myself* LOL

 

HAHAHAHAHAHAH!!! I dunno why it always ends like that. I wanna know what happens after the shower too. KYAAAAAAAAAAAA!!! *peeps shower* xD

 

Yes, he massaged him. It was begging to happen. Taiki NEEDS to be massaged. all that stress has to go away...far far away.

I'm sure Baba-chan has very strong hands. Very strong grip. We've seen how he holds guns and katana right? *grins* oh yeah, he's strong.

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Yojichan.. dun worry.. i've secretly place a hidden camera in there. Should we look at it now. *nosebleeding*

 

I think something HOT and smutty and MIND-BLOWING things are going to happen after that or at least Taiki fell asleep and Baba chan ended up giving him a "sleeping beauty" kiss. Hehehe

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Yojichan.. dun worry.. i've secretly place a hidden camera in there. Should we look at it now. *nosebleeding*

 

I think something HOT and smutty and MIND-BLOWING things are going to happen after that or at least Taiki fell asleep and Baba chan ended up giving him a "sleeping beauty" kiss. Hehehe

 

hidden camera!!! YOU'RE A GENIUS!!! muah! xD

i might not only nosebleed watching it...i might need a shower too. LOL

 

you know I like how you put two possibilities that could happen here and either way, it's gonna be REALLY HOT for the both of them.

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Yojichan.. i think i'll need some ice shower after watching the hidden camera. You might need to call 911 too!!! Massive nose bleedings are goin to happen. I will both of us will drooling and nosebleeding and getting hot then might lose our consciousness bcoz of the heat blast and TOO MUCH of happiness. LOL

 

Hahaha thtz gonna happen for sure. But usually we'll feel sleepy after some hot massage session then accidently fall asleep. One question here.. Is Taiki still wearing a bathrobe after the massage? I'm afraid that somethng going to happen while he is asleep. tied bath robe =>> when woke up.. "WHAT HAPPENED TO ME? where's my bath robe??" HAHAHAHA

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Is Taiki still wearing a bathrobe after the massage? I'm afraid that somethng going to happen while he is asleep. tied bath robe =>> when woke up.. "WHAT HAPPENED TO ME? where's my bath robe??" HAHAHAHA

 

Ah no. Not anymore. It wouldn't be easy to massage someone with the bathrobe still on.

That's why Baba-chan asked if Taiki was still wearing boxers (just in case Taiki feels shy about being completely naked)

 

Oh gosh...I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE massages.

I had one, I think a month ago.

waaaah! I felt so floopy afterwards. I felt stretched and I couldn't stop smiling. It was so good.

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i think Taiki really needs it in real life. He's been doing a lot of works and somehow i think that his stomach ache came from indigestion becoz he's too busy. Hmmm.. or maybe he ady had some HOT massage sessions bcoz i can sense that his mood is getting better. xD

 

Yojichan are you planning to continue ur untitle script?? i have a request here.. why dun you add some parts for MR. SQUIRREL? xD

 

Taiki really adores his squirrel. Baba chan vs Squirrel!!! *getting slaps by an invincible hand*

 

My mom massaged my back few days ago and IT FEELS LIKE HEAVEN!!! my back was cracking a lot and so painful and i think i can even do belly dance!!!

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i think Taiki really needs it in real life. He's been doing a lot of works and somehow i think that his stomach ache came from indigestion becoz he's too busy. Hmmm.. or maybe he ady had some HOT massage sessions bcoz i can sense that his mood is getting better. xD

 

Yojichan are you planning to continue ur untitle script?? i have a request here.. why dun you add some parts for MR. SQUIRREL? xD

 

Taiki really adores his squirrel. Baba chan vs Squirrel!!! *getting slaps by an invincible hand*

 

My mom massaged my back few days ago and IT FEELS LIKE HEAVEN!!! my back was cracking a lot and so painful and i think i can even do belly dance!!!

 

Well, that depends on how much time I still got left to write more. Heheheh! *winks*

Whenever the inspiration hits me for this, I will definitely update some more.

OHMIGOSH!! YEAH MR. SQUIRREL!!!

hmmmmmmmmmm....

Baba-chan versus Squirrel.

yeah, that sounds like a cute idea.

Okay, we'll see. No problem. :)

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