鼠ドル Posted September 2, 2011 Share Posted September 2, 2011 You ask me if I love you, Lying naked in my bed The nights with you are my pleasure But I will only give you pain Love is not what we share, it is not for us; This is just raw, animalistic lust You begged me for mercy, Saying you hate the pain I fucked you ruthlessly, Yet you're here at my door again Darling, listen to me now; You love me - and I love to see you cry Are you willing to trust me, To keep gambling with your life? There are many others out there You want a lover and I want a toy But in the end - what could possibly be better Than you, I, and a knife? 7 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ueda_Angel Posted September 2, 2011 Share Posted September 2, 2011 If only I could write half as good as that! That was great and not crappy at all! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Belita Posted September 2, 2011 Share Posted September 2, 2011 Well Blood Lust it is Bloody good hun :* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hinata--chan Posted September 2, 2011 Share Posted September 2, 2011 Awesome poem very sexy . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ginger Posted September 2, 2011 Share Posted September 2, 2011 I really like this kind of dark poetry - matches my personality Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
鼠ドル Posted September 2, 2011 Author Share Posted September 2, 2011 THank you guys, that's very sweet of you~ 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rei Posted September 2, 2011 Share Posted September 2, 2011 Nezu, I really love your poem! Really really good! You are so talented twin Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ueda_Angel Posted September 2, 2011 Share Posted September 2, 2011 I rest my case Nezu-chan you are more talented then I am. Everyone on the previous comments just said you were good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
鼠ドル Posted September 3, 2011 Author Share Posted September 3, 2011 I rest my case Nezu-chan you are more talented then I am. Everyone on the previous comments just said you were good. Just because they said this was good doesn't mean yours isn't. You got a lot of positive comments on yours as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amander123 Posted September 3, 2011 Share Posted September 3, 2011 Soooo sexy Nezumi... I think my heart stopped beating for a moment lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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