yojichan Posted March 1, 2011 Share Posted March 1, 2011 In your deep cavernous warm entrance I discover a pleasure to your pain As you writhe in bouts of havoc and rapture while i flick the bits of moisture of clammy droplets on your skin We are blinded to the world that peeks in the windows around us We are deaf to the sounds of reality but our own I am drowning between tidal waves of overwhelming euphoric torture as i viciously take you with me in my arms Your appetite knows no bounds just a bottomless pit of wanton and madness I can feel your mind screaming for me to dissolve this and yet you linger desperately for my strength to take you to places your mind fears to thread in your waking hours I know not how much deeper i can bury you in this tangled mess of sheets and twisted materials of warmth and wetness Your eyes are half closing to the silky words coming out of my mouth as i pour them endlessly to your ears Your hot breath on my ears driving me to the brink of madness and drunkenness A blinding white hot searing light we see together as we desperately capture the embrace of completion Sated, drunk, weakness, blissful sleep overcome us finally. Your lips move making a sound I could barely read. I reach for your hand as you clasp your fingers to mine We are one. 11 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JuJu Posted March 1, 2011 Share Posted March 1, 2011 ohh... so sweet............:hamtaro-005 (5): Although I dont understand all the words (im bad in english.. :hamtaro-005 (19): I have guessed many words;) ) but I love it XD Thank you XD You have fic on fanfiction, dont you??? 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JuJu Posted March 1, 2011 Share Posted March 1, 2011 and because you marked it with warning 18+ so I clicked on lol XD~ ="=:hamtaro-005 (8): Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yojichan Posted March 1, 2011 Author Share Posted March 1, 2011 Oh thank you so much for the lovely words. Yes I do write fanfiction but I have not posted any fanfic works in the forum yet. But I have a link which you can see in my signature here. *wink-wink* This poem will be a start for now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JenovaVII Posted March 1, 2011 Share Posted March 1, 2011 Oh my... This is so, so, so damn GOOD!:Red_fox7: The words you used, the way the sentences are formed, everything is amazingly done *.* I can say that I absolutely loved it and want,need to read more of this. Keep up the awesome work (: Going to your fanfiction.net page right now!~ 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yojichan Posted March 1, 2011 Author Share Posted March 1, 2011 Oh my! Thank you so much for reading. It's been quite a pleasure to bring this much pleasure to my readers. Thank you for your review. Very much appreciated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yaoi-fangirl01 Posted March 1, 2011 Share Posted March 1, 2011 I loved this, it was sooo amazing. I hope you will grace the forum with one of your stories soon :msn_red_fox 15 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yojichan Posted March 1, 2011 Author Share Posted March 1, 2011 Oh thank you so much for reading. Yes, I intend to share some of my stories in the forum in the future. I am very humbled. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nena21 Posted March 2, 2011 Share Posted March 2, 2011 I loooove it!!!!!!!!!!! I've just become your fan!!! :hamtaro-005 (12): Indeed, you should post here on the forum some of your fictions! I'd love to read them! :hamtaro-005 (6): 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yojichan Posted March 3, 2011 Author Share Posted March 3, 2011 OMG! I just earned a fan from you. Thank you so much. You just made my day. You're so sweet. *hugs* Yes, I will post more in the future for everyone's pleasure. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YLove Posted March 7, 2011 Share Posted March 7, 2011 Graet poem! I really liked it! You have a very special style! Keep it up and we surely are looking forward to more of your works! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yojichan Posted March 7, 2011 Author Share Posted March 7, 2011 I feel so warm and tingly inside. Thank you for making me feel this way. Thank you for your reading and reviewing my poem. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
현애 Posted March 7, 2011 Share Posted March 7, 2011 so nice desu.... 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yojichan Posted March 7, 2011 Author Share Posted March 7, 2011 awwww ~~ thanks so much, sweetheart. *hugs you from behind like Takumi-kun* ♥ ♥ ♥ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YLove Posted March 7, 2011 Share Posted March 7, 2011 You do not have to thank me for that! I just said what I felt! I have to thank you again for your amazing pieces of art 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neko-chan Posted March 7, 2011 Share Posted March 7, 2011 Wow, such a passionate poem. It's very romantic and sultry at the same time :cuteonion41:. I couldn't but blush while reading :3onion15:. Really awesome stuff ya got there. Keep at it! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yojichan Posted March 7, 2011 Author Share Posted March 7, 2011 Ohohohohoh! I'm blushing too. Thank you so much for reading. I'm so glad it had that effect on you as it had on me when I was writing it. What can I say? I love passion. I breathe passion. Passion is living. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
K Posted April 28, 2011 Share Posted April 28, 2011 . .OMG, senpai, this is so AMAZING :banhbao29: . .my admiration for you is getting stronger (deeper is not the right term ,right?), :cuteonion41: . .i'm not mistaken to call you as (my) senpai :leaf12: 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yojichan Posted April 29, 2011 Author Share Posted April 29, 2011 . .OMG, senpai, this is so AMAZING :banhbao29: . .my admiration for you is getting stronger (deeper is not the right term ,right?), :cuteonion41: . .i'm not mistaken to call you as (my) senpai :leaf12: *hugs tight* thanks so much for reading and your thoughts on this. I am honored that you consider me as your senpai. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cherryyuri Posted July 2, 2011 Share Posted July 2, 2011 reaalllyyy good! the ending is so touching. congratulations! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yojichan Posted July 2, 2011 Author Share Posted July 2, 2011 reaalllyyy good! the ending is so touching. congratulations! oh thank you! thank you so much for your comment and for taking the time to read my poetry. I am very happy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lilredphoenix Posted July 21, 2011 Share Posted July 21, 2011 Wow Yojichan, such sultry words that flows from your pen onto the paper filled with feeling and emotions and definitely a lot of passion. Heat, desire, needs to be fulfilled. Such talent please continue to share with us these masterpieces. I enjoyed reading this. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yojichan Posted July 22, 2011 Author Share Posted July 22, 2011 Wow Yojichan, such sultry words that flows from your pen onto the paper filled with feeling and emotions and definitely a lot of passion. Heat, desire, needs to be fulfilled. Such talent please continue to share with us these masterpieces. I enjoyed reading this. Oh thank you so much for reading and your lovely comment. *hugs* Always a pleasure to release such passionate writings and share the passion with everyone. I'm very pleased to pleasure you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Macys Posted July 22, 2011 Share Posted July 22, 2011 Yojichan, the poem is great and hot and... it's just amazing! Love it a looot! :hamtaro-005 (8): 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yojichan Posted July 22, 2011 Author Share Posted July 22, 2011 Yojichan, the poem is great and hot and... it's just amazing! Love it a looot! :hamtaro-005 (8): Oh thanks so much, Macy! I'm so happy to know that you love it. ♥ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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