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Love Me Before I Die Promise?

 

-You-

-I-

And

When I am Dead,

Before You Die,

Your Tears May Flow,

I Won't Cry For No Reason,

But I Wont Know,

Because Behind Those Tears,

Cry For Me Now, Instead..

Hides The Real Reason...

 

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When I am Dead,

Before You Die,

You Will Send Flowers,

I Will Give You Flowers,

But I Wont See,

With Thorns,

Send them Now, Instead..

So You Can Still Feel Pain..

 

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When I am Dead,

Before You Die,

You Will Say Words Of Praise,

I Won't Say Goodbye,

But I Wont Hear,

Yet Goodnight,

Praise Me Now, Instead..

And Let You Feel Free...

 

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When I am Dead,

Before You Die,

You Will Forget My Faults,

I Will Make You The Happiest Person,

But I Wont Know,

Yet I am Not Enough For You,

Forget them Now, INSTEAD…!

I am Not A Fighter ...

 

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When I am Dead,

Before You Die,

You Will Say I Was Great,

Let Me Fight For You,

If You Tell it Now I Will Feel proud,

And Fill Me With Tears,

So Please Don't Wait, tell that Now, INSTEAD…!

Before I Fall...

 

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When I am Dead,

Before You Die,

You Will Come To My Grave And Whisper "I Loved You, Why You Left",

Don't Leave Me,

But I Will Not Be Able To Fill You In My Arms,

Don't Ignore My Existence,

Don't Wait if You Have To Express, tell that Now, INSTEAD…!

Because You Are My World..

 

 

 

We

 

Something in the mirror

This image isn’t any clearer

As you come ever nearer

It’s more than I can take

 

I’ve been asking ‘round

People all telling me you’re certainly hell-bound

Pushing me down to the ground

Patting me down

 

I told you, “You’re gonna kill me someday.”

And all I can do it pray

That it won’t ever find a way

To stop my heart

 

This isn’t going anywhere

All you can do is watch as I lay here

My mind completely numb

To what you’ve just done

But I can’t stay away from you

And someday

We’re gonna hit a dead end

This road leads to a dead end

 

I can’t get you off my mind

I’m honestly blind

If I can’t see what you’re planning

I better start running

 

Images form words in my head

I’m gonna end up dead

If I let this go on any longer

But with every kiss I give you

You’re only getting stronger

 

This isn’t going anywhere

All you can do is watch as I lay here

My mind completely numb

To what you’ve just done

But I can’t stay away from you

And someday

We’re gonna hit a dead end

This road leads to a dead end..

 

†.(눈‿눈).†

The World Will Soon Have More Live People Than Dead.

 

The End

Σヾ(≧∇≦)ゞʱªʱªʱª ...Shit World... ꉂ ʱªʱªʱª (ᕑᗢूᓫ∗)

 

feel free to comment if you want..

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I loooooved the poem and how you structured it! It's so original with the 3 plans (you, me and we). It was really beautiful! :In love:

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I loooooved the poem and how you structured it! It's so original with the 3 plans (you, me and we). It was really beautiful! :In love:

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ohh!!!! yoyo4 :7yoyo: ohhhh!!! I'm so happy that you like my work.... I was just in daze of thinking what if I end up dead what will happen to my love ones that I left.... foxy3 and there is it You and Me... ohh yeah the "We" it's where we both end up dead so he feel not lonely without me onion4 kwahahahaha!! but he end up running so my plan was gone waste I saw myself lying the ground waiting my end has to come :8onion5: .... I feel so sad and sorrow that makes me want to cursed the world....:1onion49:... but it's okie :7yoyo10: thank you for linking my work poem...

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I agree that it's a very beautiful and interesting poem! I liked it very much! :leaf15:

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