Luzbel Posted January 9, 2014 Share Posted January 9, 2014 Blindness falls from the sky. Arctic whispers slash at my ears. The melting taste of nostalgia dances on my blood red tongue. The vicious call of abandonment beckons to me, beckons to me. I follow on in circles; unending circles. I’ve been carving at the frozen earth with bare hands for far too long. The crimson fluid that spills from my torn flesh fills the hollow of my grave. No warmth is cast from the shadow of the sun. Fear, Confusion, Frustration, Desperation, Echoes of the abyss… Numbness … Numbness… Silence… Silence… … Endless white. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gatichan Posted January 18, 2014 Share Posted January 18, 2014 chilling! I really liked it, it gave me shivers and it's sad, but since it's freezing cold outside, I can relate to this really well right now. Do write another!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yukiya Ayase - "Blue" Posted January 20, 2014 Share Posted January 20, 2014 Fantastic! You really are talented, you should write more often ^-^ I also like the way you write and the feelings you share with your work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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